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Everyday I Wait
Contributed by
pixie
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:57:07 AM in AEST
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Everyday I sit & I patiently wait,
For my Mum & Dad to come through the gate,
Of the children’s home where they left me,
They are parents but wanted to be free.
So I was placed into care,
Stripped naked & laid bare,
Open to hurt & open to pain,
Everything to lose, nothing to gain.
I sit here at this big window
Wondering why they left me long ago,
Will they come back & bring me home,
Or leave me here feeling so alone.
Was I really such a bad kid?
What was so wrong that I did,
To make you desert me like this,
I have not a memory of a loving kiss.
I have long cried myself dry,
Night after night as I gaze into the sky,
Why did you not show me any love?
All you could do was to kick & to shove.
I have no feelings I am totally numb,
From all those years you called me dumb,
Said how much of a burden I was to you,
I remember all those things you put me through.
I have the mind of someone older,
Carry the weight of the world on my shoulder,
Even though you treated me so bad,
You’re still my Mum & Dad.
Please come back I need a cuddle,
Ease my head from this terrible muddle,
I am still a child when all’s said & done,
A child who’s life has been anything but fun.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-21 11:57:07]
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Re: Everyday I Wait
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by MDodgen on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:02:11 PM AEST
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Please come back I need a cuddle,
Ease my head from this terrible muddle
i loved these lines. good write again, i really like your word choice. 3 stars |
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Re: Everyday I Wait
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:21:03 PM AEST
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wow!!! brilliant stuff.
though it's sad i found it fun to read. i love the rhyming used.
i like it where you've put, "i have long cried myself dry, night after night i gaze into the sky".
thank you for putting this up, it was a good read. |
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Re: Everyday I Wait
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:23:41 PM AEST
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nice work - I see you challenging yourself with topic and rhymes - bravo!
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Re: Everyday I Wait
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by shelby on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:32:41 PM AEST
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brought me to tears so touching
michelle |
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Re: Everyday I Wait
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by mountainhigh on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:28:59 PM AEST
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So sweet and tender, another beautiful poem from a beautiful heart and soul.. You have a hug from this reader.
Excellent again, thank you.
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Re: Everyday I Wait
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by KSUHO11 on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:35:26 PM AEST
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| Even when you write about something as horrible a thing as having no parents( which I can relate too) you do it beautifully and with such passion and emotion that I can feel over the seas in my heart in Georgia. Five well deserved stars. Things do get bad before they get good, but they do get good, trust me I know. Love ya. |
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Re: Everyday I Wait
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by lexxie on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:45:58 PM AEST
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very nice write agian nice flow your an awsome poet
l3xxi3 |
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Re: Everyday I Wait
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 02:08:36 PM AEST
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| That's Mean They Would Do Something Like This |
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Re: Everyday I Wait
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:25:18 AM AEST
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| Very well written. you did a good job. |
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