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Away From Here
Contributed by
blueheart
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:37:48 AM in AEST
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The constant frown on my hardened face,
The effect of living years in such a place,
Accumulative anger and surpressed aches,
Surviving each day with empty grace.
My strength endures as seasons slip by,
When wings are clipped how can I fly?
Sealed in this tomb with immense hate,
Where is the hope I will escape?
Longing to race away from here,
To leave this space of darkened fear,
The freedom to embark on a new life,
To find happiness that will discard my strife.
My blackened life a part of me,
Through blemished eyes how do I see?
To find euphoria that'll be my cure,
Quickly I must turn away from here.
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Re: Away From Here
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:45:14 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this - I think we all wish to turn away from things sometimes, however most often, the trouble follows you in one form or another -
thanks for making me think - |
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Re: Away From Here
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:59:38 AM AEST
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oh hanna, so sad, so human, written to perfection and so beautifully, i think everyone feels like this no matter where they reside, im here if you need to talk:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Away From Here
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by pixie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:06:09 AM AEST
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very thought provoking very well written
pixie xx |
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Re: Away From Here
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:08:46 PM AEST
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Yes, I have felt like this a few times in my life. Things do get better though.
Hugs,
Rita |
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Re: Away From Here
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 12:16:50 AM AEST
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| Longing to find freedom, trying to unfold your wings that are clipped..to find euphoria..this poem is a lovely poetic expression of freedom loving soul..excellent expressions.. venkat |
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Re: Away From Here
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by Baronhawk on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:25:24 PM AEST
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I know all too well this feeling you are intoning upon this here write. How those words sings familiar to my wishes too. To extricate myself from my current dilemmas and fly away to a distant place. Alas I at least find that it is impossible to fly away...absolutely...you can run for awhile but as Churchill puts it, it is better to face your travails now rather then let it gnaw at you and come clawing at you in some future time unlooked for. Oh well..anyhow.. nice write here. I can really feel your melancholia from the words set in. Very nicely done.
"in the deepest of caverns there are algae that shines unbidden, in the depths of dark oceans there are planktons that glow, in the vastness of space a distant star will always somewhere shines, in the darkest hours of your life look to those glimmers that you will ultimately find...and remember that hope ofts follow behind..." |
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Re: Away From Here
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 05:50:03 AM AEST
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I think we all have these feelings many times in life.
Good write as it makes one think.
luv, huggs, peace,
emy |
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