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Looking In
Contributed by
Buggsy
on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:05:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Bleak and dreary night,
Representative of my life.
Clouds weeping slow and steady,
As I had done so often.
Fires providing warmth all round,
None for my cold, blackened heart.
Years of anguish searching,
Searching for a place to fit.
Never had I fit this mould,
Oh how many times I tried to fit.
Unsuccessful were my attempts.
Always looking in and seeing,
Seeing a completed puzzle.
No more shall I attempt to fit,
For that which does not fit never shall.
I do however have one last attempt,
One that shall not fail in my final quest.
They shall remember forever my name,
As it slowly chokes them with regret.
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Buggsy
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2004-06-21 02:05:51]
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Re: Looking In
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:32:07 AM AEST
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very sad, beautifully heartfelt:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Looking In
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by pixie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 07:05:09 AM AEST
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very emotional, very well expressed,
pixie xx |
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Re: Looking In
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by Buggsy on
Monday, 20th September 2004 @ 11:18:14 PM AEST
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