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AN EMPTY CUP
Contributed by
emystar
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:03:05 AM in AEST
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White Dove
 
SultryRose's Signatures
Tears stream for hours
Jus longing to feel
a human touch.
My animals truely care.
They show me so much.
Sitten alone with
an old empty cup
like a begger in peices
left alone out there.
Sitten alone with an
emppty cup
Seeking not money
a touch of love
will do jus fine
Been loving long
but where's mine?
Broken peices so
very deep inside
Well it's bubbling up
Jus maybe luv will
fill my empty cup.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2004-06-21 02:03:05]
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Re: AN EMPTY CUP
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:06:57 AM AEST
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Sitten alone with
an old empty cup
like a begger in peices
left alone out there.-- I like this poem but these lines speak to me. great write I hope you feel better soon. A++++
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Re: AN EMPTY CUP
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:10:38 AM AEST
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ohhhh your note just made my heart go out to you, emy girl, my animals are also always there for me; love is there for you, and more love away from those broken peices, big hugs n' loves ya, nessa
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Re: AN EMPTY CUP
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:30:22 AM AEST
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Ah, I know the feeling! Take care, my friend. God will give you light soon. And you will be the better for the sadness you have seen.
(at least I'm hoping that's the answer)
Well written. Blessings
Andrew |
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Re: AN EMPTY CUP
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 03:49:15 AM AEST
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very beautiful write...I loved it lots of feeling and emotion flowing write through the lines that spoke to holder are the same that spoke to me I loved it...keep it up...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: AN EMPTY CUP
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by venkat on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 04:14:52 AM AEST
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Ooh..Ooh..this is heart touching..really touches with sadness...hugs my friend.
sincerely.. venkat |
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Re: AN EMPTY CUP
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 06:13:03 AM AEST
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Oh Sweetie...I hope you are feeling better today......
Luv and hugs..
Jenni |
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Re: AN EMPTY CUP
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by blueheart on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 07:02:30 AM AEST
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Very intresting imagery that depicts your sadness well.
I liked this emy, in fact I'm feeling the same way now. |
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Re: AN EMPTY CUP
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by pixie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 07:27:06 AM AEST
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awwwww this is so sad, my heart goes out to you hun, greatly written tho,
pixie xx |
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Re: AN EMPTY CUP
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:31:49 PM AEST
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It is so hard when emotions become strained and raw. I hope you will be feeling better soon, my friend.
Rita |
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Re: AN EMPTY CUP
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:11:14 PM AEST
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| Your poem sadly heard by these ears. Hope you're alright. God bless you girl. Things will look up soon, nothing last forever and that includes bad days. I pray you sleep well, or decent. take care. |
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Re: AN EMPTY CUP
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by BrandySwanson on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:16:04 PM AEST
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this is really a sad poem you've expressed your saddness well hope you feel better soon
Brandy
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Re: AN EMPTY CUP
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by Mistee on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:17:25 AM AEST
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| Great job love this poem have to go read more of your writes. thanks for sharing! |
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Re: AN EMPTY CUP
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 03:47:04 AM AEST
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Wow, I really liked this one . . . so sad . . . but beautifully written :). Like someone else said, I loved the part, "Sitten alone with
an old empty cup
like a begger in peices
left alone out there."
This was a great poem and I hope your days start looking up and soon . . .
--Nora |
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Re: AN EMPTY CUP
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by loveisendless on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 12:55:49 AM AEST
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IF LUV DOESN'T FILL IT UP YOUR HEART WILL BE SURE TO MAKE IT OVERFLOW ! YOU GOT ALOT OF LOVE WITHIN THAT BIG HEART OF YOURS !! FILL IT UP & TAKE A DRINK,B/C IF IT'S REAL LOVE THEN YOU WON'T EVEN HAVE TO THINK!!! ANOTHER 5'ER EMY!!!!
LOL~DAN!!!!! |
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Re: AN EMPTY CUP
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by angelav on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 03:08:35 AM AEST
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| My animals fill the love too. An empty cup is actually a great place to start. It must be empty to be full again. hugs-angelav |
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Re: AN EMPTY CUP
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by Dawny on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:54:06 AM AEST
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One day I will sit and read all your poems, and on that day I will cry a little, and laugh a little, but I will be a better person at the end.
Fantastic poem, so sweet and sad, excellent!!
Love Dawny xxx |
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Re: AN EMPTY CUP
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 01:42:22 AM AEST
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| this was an excellent poem. moody and real. |
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