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The Fleeting Glimpse
Contributed by
outdoorsman
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:36:10 AM in AEST
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Floating on a breeze
so light on the wind
but heavy with contemplation
like smoke dances through the air
I rise up to freedom
I meet with it head on
with a clear mind
and lost in a gale of peace
love is the flower- that must be nurtured
Life is a ghost
that must be noticed
to be realized
We all believe in it
but few know reality
Those who do though...
Understand the fleeting glimpse
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2004-06-21 01:36:10]
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Re: The Fleeting Glimpse
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:00:56 AM AEST
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| nice! very vivid. I feel the emotions behind your words. A+++ |
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Re: The Fleeting Glimpse
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:00:03 AM AEST
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| that's the most...poetic...poem I've read today. :-P what a random comment, but, that's the best way to describe how it affected me. it took me somewhere else. I liked it. :-P |
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