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With You Without
Contributed by
Calista
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:15:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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With You/Without
June 20, 2004
I love you
I hate you
I need you
Go away
I despise you
I need for you to stay
You mean something
You're nothing
I ache for you
I hate for you
I long for you
I turn from you
I left you
You left me
Together we're apart
I know you
Who are you?
Why won't you release my heart?
You make me smile
You make me cry
You say sweet words
You bark out orders
You promise me
You lie to me
I respect you
I suspect you
Forever
Not ever
With you
Without
I love you
I hate you
I feel you
I want you to leave
I despise you
You simply can't see...
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Calista
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2004-06-21 00:15:50]
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Re: With You Without
(User Rating: 1 )
by holderofthestone on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:16:31 AM AEST
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| nice! uniquely written and gripping til the end. I really enjoyed reading this. very creative. and I can relate with every line.... A++++ |
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Re: With You Without
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by pixie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 07:31:14 AM AEST
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very well worded, loved this
pixie xx |
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