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The Last Great Loss of the Week
Contributed by
paper-heart-hero
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:13:48 AM in AEST
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You’re my favorite disaster
The scent of your hair, the clothes that you wear
Keep me intoxicated and dreaming
You’re a walking suicide
These razor blades, have seen better days
Of butterfly kisses and screaming
And you’re out there everywhere I wanna be
And I’m in here my dear my sweet my everything
Kiss my wrist and say goodnight
Congratulations are in order you were right
Step back
Holding on is losing grip at seventy miles an hour
The wind in my face the look on your face
As we start to bathe
In a nine millimeter shower
Six bullets for the week
Six shots we have to take
Six ways to behave
Six days from Sunday
And you’re out there everywhere I wanna be
And I’m in here my dear my sweet my everything
Kiss my wrist and say goodnight
Congratulations are in order you were right
Step back
We can dance together
Always and forever
Cuz you’re part of me
In this steel symphony
Step back
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Re: The Last Great Loss of the Week
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:31:35 AM AEST
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Great write, James. This was really origional and really beautiful. :)
Lindsey |
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Re: The Last Great Loss of the Week
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by Dead_Next_Tuesday on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:40:52 AM AEST
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| Very nicely written. This flows wonderfully. |
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Re: The Last Great Loss of the Week
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:08:36 AM AEST
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I'm intrigued by your fatalistic gun-related imagery. Its something i've not seen before, apart from in your own previous works, of course.
It makes me wonder who inspires your stuff.
Anyway - another fine song. |
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Re: The Last Great Loss of the Week
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by Broken_Skin on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:30:45 AM AEST
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Just the sort of thing i like
Very good
BS x |
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Re: The Last Great Loss of the Week
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Wednesday, 25th August 2004 @ 02:27:32 AM AEST
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this was really good. much love and respect.
can't wait to read more. |
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