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I can't just live
Contributed by
venkat
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Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:52:27 PM in AEST
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I don’t know how much I love you
I can’t just live without your love!
You are my heart and my heart beat
You are my earth and my life breath
You are my dream and my life stream
You are my lake and my thought wave
You are my word and my song bird
You are my verse and my universe
You are my night and my moon light
You are my day and my sun-light
You are my altar and my soul-flame
You are my truth and true existence
You are my goddess and heavens bliss
You are my dawn and my love divine
You are my peace and my omniscience
I don’t know how much I love you
I can’t just live without your love!
21-6-2004
(Dedicated to Sri Kalika,the mother of Universe)
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venkat
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Re: I can't just live
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:59:42 PM AEST
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oh! this is a gorgeous poem! so sweet and oooo! just lovely! huggies n' love nessa
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Re: I can't just live
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:02:51 AM AEST
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I'm sure your mother of your universe is smiling with the sheer pleasure of this write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: I can't just live
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:05:13 AM AEST
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Your love goes out in the most beautiful way to your life and breathe. Singing praise to the most beautiful of all. The unfailing lover, giver of ecstasy and passion. Your words fill me with awe and surround me in this world we inhabit.
My venerated friend, excellent work.
Rita |
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Re: I can't just live
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by ammalu on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:09:10 AM AEST
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excellent feelings - 'true love' knews no bound - enjoyed - good write. thank u. |
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Re: I can't just live
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:30:56 AM AEST
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Passionate write!!
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Re: I can't just live
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:08:58 AM AEST
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| very sweet !! great emotions A++++ |
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Re: I can't just live
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by shelby on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:53:37 AM AEST
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delightful as always
Michelle |
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Re: I can't just live
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by kalika_vidya on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:58:44 AM AEST
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| Exquisite and excellent..K |
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Re: I can't just live
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 06:50:12 AM AEST
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magnificent
Shari |
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Re: I can't just live
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by blueheart on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 07:00:24 AM AEST
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Beautiful venkat, you described her glory and splendour so well.
Lovely, truly magnificent. |
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Re: I can't just live
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by pixie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 07:36:53 AM AEST
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your poems are amazing, wow,
pixie xx |
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Re: I can't just live
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by Kie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:12:46 AM AEST
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| It is always a joy and honor to read your magnificient poems Venkat. :) |
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Re: I can't just live
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by bernard on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:18:56 AM AEST
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As always a touching love and repect poem. May the Mother of the Universe accept your poem of devotion.
bernard, |
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Re: I can't just live
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 04:58:31 PM AEST
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well I don't know who Sri Kalika is, but I am assuming she is one lucky woman. A good poem my friend rather simplified, but written with your usual grace and style.
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Re: I can't just live
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:56:50 AM AEST
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| Truly a stupendous and touching poem. Kudos. |
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Re: I can't just live
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by arden on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:02:32 PM AEST
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such a beautiful, careing and loving write.
it was amazing to read. beautifully done.
i enjoyed it.
Arden |
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Re: I can't just live
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by emystar on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 06:20:05 AM AEST
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Incredable work of art here.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: I can't just live
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by Archie on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 04:44:22 AM AEST
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| This is a great poem (Thanks for reading my poem as well. |
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 03:18:35 PM AEST
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wow....how beautiful...!
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Re: I can't just live
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:38:45 PM AEST
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| your writing just keeps getting better and better. i liked mostly the comparisons how you can make the stereoptypical imagery seem beautiful and worth the love it is due. such as night. |
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