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My Last Good-Bye
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:03:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The fear of someone watching
as I sit alone and scared
my bleeding body awaits me
an action i was dared
The bleeding is endless
as my body shakes with fear
As if i was terrified
to look inside the mirror
My eyes are swollen
and my tears are dry
My heart is broken
as i sit and cry
There is no reason for living
Why should i even try?
It seems like the only answer
is forcing myself to die
They say suicide is wrong
although i dont agree
because as i say my last goodbyes
i begin to see
that my life is a box
with no way to get out
will i live for long?
this is something i doubt
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Re: My Last Good-Bye
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by rugby_player on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:21:30 PM AEST
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Hey, great job. Yet another great one. God how many great ones can you have. I've enjoyed talking to you and i hope we continue to be friends
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Re: My Last Good-Bye
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by jagjones on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:47:41 PM AEST
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| boy i may get in trouble but I have read so many poems like this ...you know the teen angst poems that I'm pretty hard hearted too this and can only seeit in an arty kind of way...as such the best part of the poem is the first two verses as it's not only raw but very different to most formula suicide poems |
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Re: My Last Good-Bye
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by waos on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:00:20 AM AEST
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| i liked it. but it is really sad at the end. but i understand how you can feel that your life is a box...i get feeling so closed in and like its inescapable too |
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Re: My Last Good-Bye
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:13:43 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem. Sad but true talent. Thank you for sharing this.
Lindsey |
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Re: My Last Good-Bye
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 04:35:32 AM AEST
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I too get these sort of emotions but I cling to life 'cause there are many more on this planet
that hurt the same. It's easy to die but very chalinging to live.
As far as someone taking there own life and it being wrong but God's love for all is the most forgiving enity on this planet. See that's what's so great that no matter what we do to oursellves or others, he will never leave us nor forsake us. Don't know 'bout u bit that alone gives me strength to endure the lonelyness, no matter what comes.
When I write, read and comment I know that we all have pain-n-agonies. I spend endless hours at times it seems but see God has loaned me his tallent to write, have compassion and jus maaybe help someone along the way.
Life is hard but as long as I can read and write then I find peace doing what I'm doing this very moment.
God bless u and please hang tuff 'cause we need your awesome talent.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: My Last Good-Bye
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by pixie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:09:00 AM AEST
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very deep write here, can relate to this very well, keep em coming
pixie xx |
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