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The Warrior's Oath
Contributed by
TheLastStringCut
on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:56:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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With one more swing the enemy fell
Slipped into the depths of hell
The bloodied blade dove for shelter
Back to its' scabbard, hence forever
The warrior roars an oath for all
'By my blade no other shall fall
My executioner time has ended
But the chaos left in my wake cannot be mended
I shall spend my life protecting good
With the very blade that drank so much blood
A 'manslayer' call me no more
For I am through with this petty war
Defending the weak is how I shall live
Until that time when my body gives
To this oath I will remain
And not let my life be lived in vain.'
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TheLastStringCut
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Re: The Warrior's Oath
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by deadbloodyrose on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:06:11 PM AEST
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| i like ur poem jeff its awesome BUT EVEN BETTER THAN UR POEM IS YOU!!!!! RAWR!!! *hugs u* LOVE YA KID!!! .........AMI JO |
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Re: The Warrior's Oath
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:37:44 PM AEST
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beautifully written, vivid and meaningful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Warrior's Oath
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by jagjones on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:51:05 PM AEST
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| Not bad I thought different to most oath poems that promise violent revenge so kudos to you. Nice use of the language I must say too |
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