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Please Hang On
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
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Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:50:12 PM in AEST
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In all the times it seems so hard,
When your tears cry out inside,
You must explore a new way to live,
And reverse your depression tide,
When all of your solutions,
When their problems seem too much,
Everyone has their joys
Very elusive and out of touch
Remember that this world is full of others
Just like you, And can reach
beyond this darkness
And change your point of view
But when it all seems very bleak,
And your hope has all but gone,
Remember, time will heal your heavy thoughts
If only you'll just hang on.
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Living_In_My_Dream
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2004-06-20 21:50:12]
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Re: Please Hang On
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by Bones on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:55:22 PM AEST
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Hey Dani,
Cool poem! I loved it! Keep writing!
your friend/fellow poet,
Bones |
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Re: Please Hang On
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by slackoffsamiam on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:56:44 PM AEST
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| First of all I want to thank you ever so much for commenting on my poems, I truly appreciate it, and I want to say how much I like this poem because I can relate to it, but anyways I look forward to your many poems. |
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Re: Please Hang On
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by rugby_player on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:17:04 PM AEST
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| Hey....I liked this. Thanks for writing me one.....great work..and what a surprise |
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Re: Please Hang On
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:18:08 AM AEST
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What a beautiful dedication to rugby and everyone else in this situation on the site. Thank you for the wonderful poem. Great write.
Lindsey |
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Re: Please Hang On
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:07:01 AM AEST
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| its seems that some wounds even time cant heal.... amazing write thanks for you wonderful tribute. A++++ |
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Re: Please Hang On
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 04:53:40 AM AEST
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This is a very touching write.
It shows great compassion for anyone who goes thru these types of thought's.
Keep up the good writing 'cause there are many on our planet that jus get tired and need a lift just as this write.
God bless u.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Please Hang On
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by pixie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:10:22 AM AEST
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this is a very positive write and a lovely dedication to everyone, thanks for sharing this
pixie xx |
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Re: Please Hang On
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by babyboobooangel on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 07:10:24 PM AEST
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very nice write i have just recently discovered my inspiration the person who gives me the ability to write
i almost lost her and if i had read this poem im sure i would of felt alot better and as to do with sucide iv been there so this poem fits to me will i loved the write
keep more commin
pCe // the baby angel |
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