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Fitting Dreams
Contributed by
MLCstar
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Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:29:37 PM in AEST
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Deep into the darkness dreaming,
Lying on my back and thinking,
Why must life be so unwanted?
None but those who death affronted.
So dream on no thought of waking,
‘Bout the ones content on taking.
Out into the blackness crying,
No more dreams but go on lying.
Alone in my broken pieces
Wrapped up in my blanket’s creases
In the pool from my tears writ
What puzzles do my pieces fit?
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Re: Fitting Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:46:36 PM AEST
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The Raven is one of my favorite poems as well!
I love edgar allen poe. nice poem! ;-) |
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Re: Fitting Dreams
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 09:53:17 PM AEST
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Oh, I'm afraid I cannot be subjective here... I am a huge EAP fan! I think this is quite awesome... of course though, you had me with the comment! lol!!!!
What puzzles do my pieces fit?
Ohhhhhh... I love that line! I posted a poem called "Pieces" a while back --- I boldly suggest that I know exactly where your mind was when you wrote that line!
Your new fan-
SNM |
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Re: Fitting Dreams
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by deadbloodyrose on
Friday, 2nd July 2004 @ 05:03:52 PM AEST
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| very well written poem. it flows together nicely.. you did a great job.. AMI JO |
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Re: Fitting Dreams
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by Opinionator on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 03:36:10 PM AEST
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| Very Hypnotic. That's HYPNOTIC. I can understand why you like this poem so much. |
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