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A Single Doubt
Contributed by
pyrofairyburning
on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:45:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Why can’t I eat
Why can’t I sleep
Why am I drowning
In sorrow so deep
So many questions
Such little time
Is this life I see before me
Really mine?
Bound by things I hate
Feelings I would rather not know
Wounds that never heal
Pain that just won’t go
Same song playing
Past five hours on repeat
Depressing and perfect for me
Misery so cruel and so sweet
Through all of these years
I laid unknown amongst the best of you
I was the outcast
Failing with all I tried to do
And now I feel I’m dieing
My body seems so ill
I try and find some hope
But I don’t think I will
I yell at my mother
Asking to be left on my own
When really it’s a scream
Pleading to not be left alone
Once captivated by my goals
Dreams of becoming someone
Lovedand full of pride
But that road is too long and far
I find nothing and no one
Can reach into me and pull me out
From this body in which I lie
Is it worth it to even cry ?
Never going anywhere
It’s easy to just give in
Suicide is so appealing
Yet suicide is a sin
But now I do not care
If it were not for this one fear
I would be dead by now
One small doubt, is all that keeps me here
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2004-06-20 20:45:57]
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Re: A Single Doubt
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:58:26 PM AEST
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very sad write, keep your head held high I will always be here for you if you have no one...PM me and I will do my best...well this write had a lot of emotion and your feelings flowing through it...very eautiful yet again very sad...however keep it up...
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Re: A Single Doubt
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:07:09 PM AEST
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| a very intriguing piece. emotional dowpours on all who read this. |
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Re: A Single Doubt
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:10:03 PM AEST
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| i like that. i think that's quite possibly the same doubt that keeps a lot of people alive. i't a good doubt to have sometimes when you reach really dark places. loved the poem, btw. |
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Re: A Single Doubt
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by pixie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:17:30 AM AEST
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great poem, you are right suicide is appealing, but then again so is living, thanks for sharing
pixie xx |
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