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The River
Contributed by
slackoffsamiam
on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:48:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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The water crashes all about me
I paddle for me dear life
The rocks are rushing toward
My kyak; the only thing
Between me and the harsh,
Unrelenting river
But they will not touch it
Left and right I go, manuvering
Through the river as if it were a creek.
Slicing though the water like
A hot knife through butter
Just when I start to get cocky
Mother Nature deals a death blow
To my kyak
I fly head on into the
surging blue abyss
And the water that gives like
Threatens to take mine
But instead she lets me go
I've survived tougher
Christopher Lee Huff
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slackoffsamiam
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2004-06-20 19:48:12]
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Re: The River
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:43:26 PM AEST
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beautiful wording I liked this one a lot...
surging blue abyss
that line stand out to me...very beautiful keep it up...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: The River
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 10:08:49 PM AEST
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| that was an amazing write. it reminded me of old times where i was conceited for just a moment and karma took over to give me horrible memories for the rest of my life, lol. |
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