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Changes
Contributed by
slackoffsamiam
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Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:39:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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You try to change me but you cannot
You had my heart tied in a knot
You say you liked my but is this so
My heart was tied up in a bow;
I liked you maybe loved you with everything I had
But then one day everything went bad
You threw away everything we had
everthing we shared
It was as if you never cared
You blame it on me because I didnt change
I felt as if my whole life was rearranged;
You try to change me but you cannot
You had my broken heart tied in a knot.
Christopher Lee Huff
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slackoffsamiam
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2004-06-20 19:39:12]
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Re: Changes
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:36:46 PM AEST
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hey!, I really liked this it was beautifully written I loved it nice wording...
read and comment my stuff if you want Id love to hear what you think
much love,
Dani |
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Re: Changes
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:57:10 PM AEST
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this is a wonderful poem, i love it all the way through and your ending is excellent:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Changes
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:43:08 PM AEST
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| i am glad you did not change for her even though you lost her. if you would have changed who would you have been then? you would have always bent to her will and turned into something you would have hated and she would have left you eventually anyway. excellent write. |
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