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Wings (Part II)
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 06:55:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I’m not as strong as I once thought
My promise, darling, is all for naught
I’ve struggled and was wounded some
With broken wing, to you I come
I have to know, forever true
With damaged wings what will we do?
Freedom has never been our friend
But Oh! Don’t let it be the end
We must find a way to continue on
I cannot accept that hope is gone
I only know this, forever true
With or without wings, I still want you
Listen now and you’ll hear my cries
I’m falling from a darkened sky
You are already there on the ground
There an answer will be found
I need to know, forever true
Can you be strong enough for two?
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Re: Wings (Part II)
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by holderofthestone on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:02:02 PM AEST
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| ahhh beautiful! I never you had it in you, sometimes you just need the right inspiration to get it ot of you. another great poem, you always flood such strong emotions. A++++ |
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Re: Wings (Part II)
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by Archie on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:02:03 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem. 2 wounded birds falling in love like two wounded hearts grasping for each other. |
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Re: Wings (Part II)
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:08:38 PM AEST
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What a beautiful continuation of an already amazing poem. Thank you for sharing this. Your style is exsquisite and your rhyming superb. Loved ever line from beginning to end. :)
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Re: Wings (Part II)
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:09:23 PM AEST
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wow! exquisitly beautiful! what a poem! hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Wings (Part II)
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by pixie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:19:18 AM AEST
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this is lovely, really lovely
pixie xx |
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Re: Wings (Part II)
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by ShadowDaughter on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:54:20 PM AEST
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WOW. *jaw drops*
I love this one. IloveitIloveitIloveit. Certainly my favorite one from you so far, and rivalling Stitch's 'SLITHERING' for the best poem I've read today. I just can't get over how amazing this one is . . . beautiful rhyme and flow, wonderful meaning, skillfully written.
"With damaged wings what will we do?"
"Can you be strong enough for two?"
Wow, wow, and wow . . . this is great. I can't wait till I get to your first Wings.
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Re: Wings (Part II)
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by venkat on
Saturday, 26th June 2004 @ 01:55:54 AM AEST
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| Exquisite..beautifully touching..your loving heart again shines in each word. venkat |
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Re: Wings (Part II)
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:47:31 PM AEST
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Ah, another beautiful piece. Especially after reading part I. They compliment each other wonderfully. Well done!
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Re: Wings (Part II)
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th May 2006 @ 04:34:23 AM AEST
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I honestly read this several times, Snemmers. I really like it, but my thoughts have been so severely scattered tonight it was difficult for me to gather them. So, now they've all settled in a place where I seem to be able to pick some up and finally post my comment.  [photobucket.com] One of the things I really really liked about this was imagery, Snem, imagery. I really like love poems anyway so yeah, love the emotions, but, yes, the imagery at least for me is great!
Timber
(who for some reason now thinks two years later that you'd be the one strong enough for two)
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