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when the problems are mine
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 04:42:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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we all have our problems
we all have bad days
but when you have yours
it becomes my job to say
the words to make better
whatever bothers you
or to lay out a plan
for what you should do
Im there for you all
all of the time
but no one is there
when the problems are mine
and I grow so weary
of telling you things
on how to repair
your dents and your dings
because sometimes im sad
and I need advice
Im forced to just gamble
by rolling the dice
and I miss most the time
I fail in my life
but Im there for you
to help with your strife
so its ok in your eyes
cause your problems fade
but mine linger on
each and every day
you ask me so much
you cry to me at night
but you never stick around
to see if im alright
we just fix your worries
and your off til they return
but im left alone
with my prolems and I yearn
that one day while im counseling
maybe one will stop and say
thanks for all your help
and how are you today?.....
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Re: when the problems are mine
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 04:49:59 PM AEST
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Wow, this is powerful!!!!!
I've felt this way before and i'm glad someone wrote about it. I guess we all like to talk about our problems. If you ever want to b itch to me about something feel free. I loved this lots and had to read this 2 times. And the ending was perfect too. Wow and Wow.
Awesome write.
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~Kris~ |
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Re: when the problems are mine
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 05:11:04 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this...because I feel like this all the time...but you change that for me sometimes by just messageing me and that makes me feel someone at least cares just a little bit...and I do want to say thank you for being there...well if you want to talk I am here whenever you want...well great write a lot of us can relate, keep it up...
much love,
Dani
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Re: when the problems are mine
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by Archie on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 05:39:46 PM AEST
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| Hi, and how are you? I hear a lot about your poetry it is down to earth, I like that. If you need a friend I'm on this site almost everyday. |
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Re: when the problems are mine
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by Luinil on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 06:57:33 PM AEST
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| very well put... great writing * |
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Re: when the problems are mine
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by Calista on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:48:42 PM AEST
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this is a poem that deserves all great words magnificent! marvelous! amazing! incredible! beautiful! and so on and so on
chris, id have to say this is my favorite of all of yours
i have a friend that does this very same thing, but you wrote this out divinely
CONGRATULATIONS!
your friend,
Calista |
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Re: when the problems are mine
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by rugby_player on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:41:49 AM AEST
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| very good write...i can relate to a lot of your work. I'm here if you need to talk just send me a message..i will help the best i can |
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Re: when the problems are mine
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by pixie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:25:09 AM AEST
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tremendous write
pixie xx |
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Re: when the problems are mine
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by MDodgen on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:12:34 PM AEST
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| *sob* your words break my heart, you always have someone there for you. to love and hold you. please don't ever think you're alone. 5 stars beautiful write. |
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Re: when the problems are mine
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 08:52:55 AM AEST
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| i think this poem is very inreguing you put alot of thought into its reeally good please read mine lol xxx |
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