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A Angel For A Soldier
Contributed by
Thiswoman
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Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 04:14:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
war
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A angel for a soldier to keep you safe at all times. A guardian angel for your pocket to stay with you where ever you go or do in your life. A angel to keep you safe while fighting for everyones freedom. Some people only have one angel looking out for them. Soldiers have a lot more. And I hope you know who your guardian angels are.
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Re: A Angel For A Soldier
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 06:39:18 PM AEST
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Your thoughts are nice but it definitely needs structuring.
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Re: A Angel For A Soldier
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by fastpitchqt on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 08:58:12 PM AEST
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| very nice. You could prolly word it differently and elaborate more. This poem could totally be longer. I hope that my marine has an angel looking out over him when he goes back to iraq! I already lost a friend. |
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Re: A Angel For A Soldier
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by buchi on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 06:26:24 AM AEST
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| We in our preoccupied lives, forget or fail to acknowledge "THIS ANGEL"...beautiful write... |
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Re: A Angel For A Soldier
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 06:44:30 PM AEST
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| It should be An angel and I suggest you use a poetry format, otherwise its fine. |
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Re: A Angel For A Soldier
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by Angelochek on
Friday, 17th September 2004 @ 02:09:41 AM AEST
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Nice poem, but it will be easier to read if you used poetry structure.
Keep Writing,
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Re: A Angel For A Soldier
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by JacobsKK on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 07:54:43 PM AEST
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| Very true...I love it when poets write about gaurdian angels, it makes me feel like there is one right next to me |
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Re: A Angel For A Soldier
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by FlirtQueen on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 09:01:20 PM AEST
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| oh my goodness, that was the most touching poem i've read yet today. you chose the right words and the right topic, keep it up!! |
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Re: A Angel For A Soldier
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by car21221 on
Thursday, 27th October 2005 @ 10:38:28 PM AEST
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| nice tribute to our soldiers they need all the pertection they can get |
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Re: A Angel For A Soldier
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by crazyn on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 12:17:26 PM AEST
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| your poem is short and straight to the point and it made me think. well done!! |
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Re: A Angel For A Soldier
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by The_Phantom on
Monday, 11th October 2010 @ 01:42:36 AM AEST
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I know there are angels among us soldiers, I've made it through three conflicts, and at times i thought, "Mybe I shouldn't have," so thank you for the post...God bless the soldier.
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