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Keeper of the Darkness
Contributed by
Mortis-Dark
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Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 04:06:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I am the keeper of the darkness.
Let me lie and make you hollow.
Build you up to send you spiraling down.
Smiles turn to frowns in the absence of my crown.
Push you down and walk ontop of you.
I loom in the shadows.
You will not reconize me.
I am what you fear most.
That beast just yonder the pearl gate.
With eyes glaring.
Smile soaring.
I'll take you up for any offer.
Lead you on a road of faith with lost dreams.
My lips contain posion.
My words with frail remorse.
I curse and I spit.
Just in time for youto bite your lip.
Killer Im labled.
Leader of the false.
Preacher of the damned.
King of torment.
All these things yes I am.
My sign boasting solitude.
The sun and stars bow to me.
For I am there master.
The puppet and the widdlers hand.
The keep of the darkness.
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Mortis-Dark
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Re: Keeper of the Darkness
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 04:31:29 PM AEST
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Nice write! Loved the imagery and you did such a great job with this.
This is my favorite part
I am the keeper of the darkness.
Let me lie and make you hollow.
Build you up to send you spiraling down.
Smiles turn to frowns in the absence of my crown.
Push you down and walk ontop of you.
Wonderful write!
~Kris~ |
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Re: Keeper of the Darkness
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by dark_angel_of_poetry on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 04:52:57 PM AEST
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| Great poem! I kinda have to wonder what spurred this idea but anyway... Great job and keep writing. |
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Re: Keeper of the Darkness
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by pixie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:26:02 AM AEST
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great poem, very dark and powerful
pixie xx |
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Re: Keeper of the Darkness
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by Vermillion on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:58:13 AM AEST
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A true dark poem,thanx for sharing and keep up the good work
~vermillion~ |
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Re: Keeper of the Darkness
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by MLCstar on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 08:07:21 PM AEST
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| This stirs up feelings of, oh how exactly do I put it, morbit appreciation, I suppose. You use your words so well. Very enjoyable. |
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