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Still here
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 03:55:55 PM in AEST
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empty depth, this hollow void
the cries of my heart
never heard
the tears dont stop
but the caring does...
listen
listen to my soft sobbing
do you hear them?
you cause them
what right do you have?
why did I let you in my soul?
when Ive never been allowed in...
you amuse me
you abuse me
you tease me
you ease me
you make this pain that lets know im still here...
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2004-06-20 15:55:55]
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Re: Still here
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 04:10:28 PM AEST
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Very nice and a good write.
My favorite part
the tears dont stop
but the caring does
Well worded and true. I liked the emotion and a nice write.
~Kris~ |
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Re: Still here
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 04:36:01 PM AEST
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I really liked this...it screams truth and has much emotion...I to would have to say that this is my favorite part
the tears dont stop
but the caring does
I loved the wording keep it up...
much love,
Dani
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Re: Still here
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:58:23 AM AEST
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Very strong write.
Makes one stop and think.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Still here
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by blueheart on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 07:04:06 AM AEST
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| I absolutely love the last line. |
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