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Moral Compass
Contributed by
Butterat_Zool
on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:29:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Lost our children
All-Star children
Always yearning
Never free
Christmas crumbles
Tears and tumbles
Blind and boating
On the sea
Burn the fires
All the fires
Throw the witches
To the geese
Have a baby
Hope he’ll save me
Foggy Heaven
Never free
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Butterat_Zool
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2004-06-20 09:29:04]
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Re: Moral Compass
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by Butterat_Zool on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:33:03 AM AEST
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| By the way, in the second stanza, that's Tears as in "The salty tears of the crying infant watered my lawn more than his scraped-up knee." and not tears as in "It tears at my heart to see people in love with someone they could never have." Hope you enjoyed my bad poem. Butterat Zool. |
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Re: Moral Compass
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 11:28:17 PM AEST
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| i wouldnt call it bad. i just have no idea what this is about. so i cant judge what i dont know can i? anyway leaves mystery for me to wonder about later. =] |
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