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Single Bullet
Contributed by
rugby_player
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Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 01:43:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I come and sit everyday
Just to see the back of your head
I know you don't know i'm here
But i am
And i care
When you were wasting you life on drugs
I'm the one that got you help
When you were the one that got pregnant i was there to comfort you
I know you don't realize it but i was always there because i was in love with you
It is now the end of the year
I'm more depressed then ever because you
Have dropped out
Living in your own apartment working 2 jobs
All because the dad ran off
Its the middle of the summer
By the time you get this it will be to late
I've got my .357 with a single round
Written on that round is
I loved you
This bullet is dedicated to you
Copyright ©
rugby_player
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2004-06-20 01:43:56]
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Re: Single Bullet
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:07:16 AM AEST
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wow, this was sad...very unique I enjoyed it just like I do all your other writes...keep it up...youll do great...have fun
much love,
Dani |
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Re: Single Bullet
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by emystar on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:09:28 AM AEST
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This is very sad. If u love them u want hurt them like this. I'm so sorry that u think that life issn't worth living. I've lived alone for close to five years, this time. So please don't use the bullet. As long as there's life there is hope.
I had to be alone to find myself. If I'm not happy with self then I can't love. We have to be able to look in the mirror and get things right for me once we've conquered our own beast then I we have inner peace.
Luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy,
emy |
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Re: Single Bullet
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:32:10 AM AEST
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| very powerful write. the words cry out. I can relate with the pain here. great job A++++ |
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