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More True
Contributed by
HellsLibrarian
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Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 01:24:32 AM in AEST
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Deformed on the outside
ridiculed, spurned
a pathetic attempt at a normal life
distorted and malformed for all to see
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Deformed on the inside
accepted, welcomed
a pathetic excuse for a human being
distorted and twisted but hidden by hypocrisy
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Deformed in and out, in or out
reviled, cherished
a pathetic existence to suffer imprisoned
distorted and warped and neither more true a reality
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2004-06-20 01:24:32]
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Re: More True
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by emystar on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 01:49:01 AM AEST
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Very very deep.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: More True
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by thumper on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:39:14 AM AEST
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Very Deep. You can't judge a book by it's cover, what's inside might surprise you!! This may have been short, but spoke volumes. Write on and Peace to ya!
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Re: More True
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 02:29:05 AM AEST
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very insightful and well written:) hugs n' love nessa
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