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You're going to be alright
Contributed by
rhei76
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Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:29:49 AM in AEST
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I remember the words
Of a dying God
Back from a
Life I forgot
Told to the last of sons
Blessing is virtue
To old and young
If you can be true
Don't forsake it, my son
He told of the long journey
That led to his
Happiness of life
Son, you're going to be alright
One day you will have a wife
And blessings will you have
So don't forsake love
Because it's a blessing
Don't forget that
Don't forget that, my son
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rhei76
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2004-06-20 00:29:49]
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Re: You're going to be alright
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by HellsLibrarian on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:40:51 AM AEST
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a fitting poem for father's day.
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Re: You're going to be alright
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by betty on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 12:43:25 AM AEST
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good poem.
It gave me hope for love, but I was just getting used to the idea of being bitter forever ;)
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Re: You're going to be alright
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by emystar on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 01:14:28 AM AEST
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Very goodd write.
Beautifully said.
Very positive.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: You're going to be alright
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 01:37:24 AM AEST
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I like this! Very true words, and fittingly spoken. well done!
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Re: You're going to be alright
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by pixie on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:10:30 AM AEST
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great write, well done to you
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