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Sky Die
Contributed by
Seans_Girl
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Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:22:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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When I was little I told my mom I could fly high like a bird
But I never knew I could die
It happened so fast and sudden
It was a dream with a bad ending
I felt nothing through the air
With a quick stop I was there
The place I never was before
My new home was given to me
A place called Heaven
Far from the place I was just then
Copyright ©
Seans_Girl
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2004-06-19 22:22:39]
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Re: Sky Die
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by betty on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:32:53 PM AEST
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Also another impressive poem from the mind of a child.
Great poem.
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Re: Sky Die
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by emystar on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:43:06 PM AEST
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I agree with Betty, awesome for the age of ten.
Very good write no manter the age u wrote it.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Sky Die
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by waos on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:49:28 PM AEST
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| yeah, i agree. good stuff. |
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Re: Sky Die
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by pixie on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:19:38 AM AEST
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wow, cant believe you were only 10 when you wrote this, its great,...
pixie xx |
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Re: Sky Die
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 7th August 2010 @ 09:53:27 AM AEST
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| enjoyed that, good work ! |
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