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to the Parents
Contributed by
betty
on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:20:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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You've given me
your wisdom,
paranoia,
dellusions.
The ignorance
I resisted
though independence day
you sucked dry
the fun
from the proverbs
on the wall,
sparing the child
holding the rod
floating in the tears
of my will-
unbreakable,
no remorse
for your fears.
Copyright ©
betty
... [
2004-06-19 22:20:52]
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Re: to the Parents
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:38:10 PM AEST
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wow, very deep I liked it a lot...and yes thats how it is...and it kinda sux well keep up the good work...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: to the Parents
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by waos on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:55:17 PM AEST
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| i can relate a bit. good job. |
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Re: to the Parents
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by rugby_player on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:05:01 PM AEST
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| good job. i really liked it |
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Re: to the Parents
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:27:05 PM AEST
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Another great write, I love all of your writing and I can't wait for more. Very deep and well done.
~Kris~ |
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