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InnerBeautyQueen
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Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:04:06 PM in AEST
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will you wait for me on the corner of eternity
you say you want me to get "better" but i
don't think i'm all that sick
babe, i know you say that denial is the answer
you knew you'd hear
but i can't deny what doesn't exist
and, honey, you know that's true
you dont do what you say you will
you'll run away, darling, don't lie to me
don't say you'll stay
'cause then you'll just leave
and then i'll be crying and dying for the rest of
whatever i have left
how long do you think i can continue living like this
empty inside in so many more ways than one
and i don't want your pity or you help
baby, i just want your love
i don't want this never ending simpathy
and i'm not gonna change
oh, my love, don't you dare start crying
not for me
and don't you go away all mad like that
don't prendend to leave
oh, baby, you can't leave someone who's long
gone
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by betty on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:11:24 PM AEST
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That was pretty serious. And good. You made feel something, so it must be a great poem. but now I'm sad-thanks a lot :)
Check out some of my stuff- you might like "desperate girl" and "All you Are". They're kind of of the same tone.
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:16:36 PM AEST
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| deep... well written and great flow. another good poem as usuall. A++++ |
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by rugby_player on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:18:43 PM AEST
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| Good job man. I liked how you worded it. I've been through the same thing once so it hits home for me. Well if you want read and comment on some of mine. Thanks again for writing such a great poem |
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by waos on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:00:47 PM AEST
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| that rocks. its so good. i really like it. makes me wonder what the story behind it is. |
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