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Unspoken Words
Contributed by
pepzislut69
on
Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Skin so soft,
Body so built,
I wish I could have you,
But all i do is sit.
I sit in the darkness,
And wait for you to come,
Im waiting for you to take me away,
Because im missing you.
All I can think about anymore is you
Because thats all thats on my mind
I wish I could have you,
But all I have is a picture of you in my mind
Ever since that last day in September,
The first time I saw you,
I've wanted to tell you how I felt about you.
But I could'nt,
And I can't..
Until You tell me what your wanting with me
By the way, I Love You.
Copyright ©
pepzislut69
... [
2002-10-18 16:45:00]
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Re: Unspoken Words
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 05:49:34 PM AEST
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| I like this poetry. Simple and touch my heart.... I feel same as the writer ........ I love someone but I cant tell him what I feel .. i hope the writer will find his/her love |
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Re: Unspoken Words
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th October 2002 @ 01:02:42 AM AEST
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| just a guest herew again, nice words,simple but nice!Guest |
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Re: Unspoken Words
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th October 2002 @ 07:58:20 AM AEST
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| Very nice writing!! Somehow I can relate to what you say!! Nebill |
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Re: Unspoken Words
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by WordPoet on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 05:02:55 AM AEST
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The emotional content is very easy to relate to for anyone who's in a similar circumstance. Don't ever lose the feelings as you practice the writing. It is the heart that conveys the emotions and in this aspect you are right on the money.
I couldn't, I can't... I know this too. |
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