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She said
Contributed by
betty
on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:38:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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She said,
your life's not that important.
As I held a mirror
in front of her face.
She said,
if you try you'll fail.
As I exposed
my insecure center.
She said,
you never do anything.
As I fell exhausted
on her floor.
She said,
you hate everyone.
As I claimed what was left
of my soul from this world.
She said,
you are better than I.
As I listend to every ounce of spite
dribble from her wasting mind.
She said,
i want to be like you.
As I held her blood stained hands
when the verdict was read.
Copyright ©
betty
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2004-06-19 21:38:01]
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Re: She said
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:06:25 PM AEST
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| ooo very good! a bit dark, and very good... once again, good |
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Re: She said
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:41:38 PM AEST
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o very nice job on this one...dark but very much filled with feeling...I enjoyed it...keep it up
much love,
Dani |
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Re: She said
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by rugby_player on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:09:28 PM AEST
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| i went back and read this one 2 times i liked it so much good job |
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Re: She said
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:25:24 PM AEST
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The whole thing was wonderful in a dark way but it was good. I like the ending too!
~Kris~ |
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