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Darkness of One's Eye
Contributed by
ShadowFox
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Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:23:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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As she gazes upon me with deep dark eyes
I feel the day swiftly passing by.
The night falls quickly with it’s silvery moon,
As the time passes in late June.
As I feel the darkness of one’s eye.
The night is breezy and cold,
As the shadows stay bold.
Feeling not what one should feel,
But feeling what darkness reviles.
As I feel the darkness of one’s eye.
Now the new day begins to bring,
The light of life and birds that sing.
As the dark turns into light,
I gaze upon the world so bright.
As I feel the darkness of one’s eye.
-ShadowFox- (NG)
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ShadowFox
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2004-06-19 21:23:43]
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Re: Darkness of One's Eye
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by betty on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:05:35 PM AEST
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| good poem. I think the ending is really strong. Good job on getting published!!!!!!!! ;) -betty |
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Re: Darkness of One's Eye
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by pixie on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:24:25 AM AEST
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congrats on getting this published... great poem
pixie xx |
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Re: Darkness of One's Eye
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:45:22 AM AEST
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Indeed, congratulations. I'm impressed that this was given kudos in print.
Well written. |
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