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An innocent suicide no one but I tried to stop...and I did
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:03:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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He covers his arm,
To hide the scar,
He remembers someone saying,
"No one cares who you are",
He bought a ticket,
And came to the dance,
He gave socializing,
One more chance,
He sat in the back,
From everyone he fled,
He cut up his arm,
And cried as he bled,
People kept away,
As he bled on the floor,
Tears ran down his face,
As he cut some more,
"What is he doing?",
"How long has he cried?",
They asked as they watched,
This Innocent Suicide...
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Living_In_My_Dream
... [
2004-06-19 21:03:09]
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Re: An innocent suicide no one but I tried to stop...and I did
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by TwEeK on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:08:17 PM AEST
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sounds like me on one of the last dances i went to.....glad you helped him tho...you must be a real good friend....another great poem.....luck to the both of you
tweeky xx |
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Re: An innocent suicide no one but I tried to stop...and I did
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:14:26 PM AEST
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| My heart weeps for him, and my soul holds him, how sad this was but he truely found a forever friend in you, thanks for saving this lost soul, take care and bless you, always Val |
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Re: An innocent suicide no one but I tried to stop...and I did
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 09:19:07 PM AEST
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very sad
Michelle |
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Re: An innocent suicide no one but I tried to stop...and I did
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by rugby_player on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:07:39 PM AEST
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| See this si why i don't go to dances or anything because no matter how good looking you may think i am i still have trouble with girls....that on top of all the other "stuff" thats making my life so crappy really gets me down and gets me thinking about suicide. This really hit home for me......great job girl |
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Re: An innocent suicide no one but I tried to stop...and I did
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:25:29 PM AEST
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That is so sad. At least you were there, Thank GOD you were there. And look, now he has a friend. This is a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing this. Best of luck to both of you and your friendship.
Lindsey |
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Re: An innocent suicide no one but I tried to stop...and I did
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by betty on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:13:43 PM AEST
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| Another magnificant poetic display!!!! |
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Re: An innocent suicide no one but I tried to stop...and I did
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by betty on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:14:34 PM AEST
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| Another magnificant poetic display!!!! |
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Re: An innocent suicide no one but I tried to stop...and I did
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:30:05 AM AEST
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| I have come very close to doing this very same thing when I was in school. This is a very beautiful and heartfelt poem. Awesome write!!!! |
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Re: An innocent suicide no one but I tried to stop...and I did
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by pixie on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:26:59 AM AEST
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wow this is amazingly written, very touching
pixie xx |
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Re: An innocent suicide no one but I tried to stop...and I did
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:13:19 PM AEST
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| very good! |
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Re: An innocent suicide no one but I tried to stop...and I did
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by slackoffsamiam on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:03:15 PM AEST
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| This is the type of poem you get sucked into, wow. |
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Re: An innocent suicide no one but I tried to stop...and I did
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:00:16 AM AEST
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Very sad and touching.
The sadest part is that u were the only that helped. Folks can be so cold at times.
You are a true hero!
luv, huggs, blessings,
emy
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Re: An innocent suicide no one but I tried to stop...and I did
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by dcampbell1313 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:08:50 PM AEST
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| This is good, i like the rhyming. Very well put together, even with the rhymes it still flows very nice without sounding like u had to come up with a word that doesnt fit into the poem! Well.. this is a very nice poem... Keep commenting on my poems, i added a new one "Always?"! |
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