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The Woman You Seem
Contributed by
quietdaze
on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 06:48:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The woman you truly are
Hides deep down inside
Beneath the woman
You seem on the outside
You live your life
The woman you seem
But the woman you are
Withdraws to dream
And the woman you are
Knows sudden fear
And hides even deeper
When love comes near
For love might look closely
And might even see
You...the woman you are
Beneath the woman you seem to be
my final post.....all future poems will be for my true love's eyes only...as soon as I find her.
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2004-06-19 18:48:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Woman You Seem
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:17:16 PM AEST (User
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This is really beautiful,well written. Reconsider posting again, because i enjoyed this very much. |
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Re: The Woman You Seem
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:43:12 PM AEST (User
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lovely flowing write yes I agree you should keep posting
Michelle |
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