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Everything to do with You.
Contributed by
DreamsOfDark
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Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
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Sorry Mom and Dad. This Has nothing to do with you. Sorry my love. This has nothing to do with you. My firends who will never care, I'm sorry to you too. But it has nothing to do with you .
The light has faded from my life, it means nothing to me now. Happiness was my devoted mistress, and even she has deserted me. She was never my friend, it was her cruel sister delusion. But it dosen't matter anymore.
This is to those who know who I am. This is to those who have seen my soul and have touched my heart. I was nothing to you and yet you ruled my life. I was your willing puppy and all you did was kick me. I just kept comming back and you know why, I was nothing without you.
To those who surround me and judge me every day. You molded me into the empty shell that I am. You drained my life of love and yet my emotions carry on. You never looked deeper you were just a hinderance. You are not my problem, the circle will be completed.
To myself, I am sorry but you are the cause of everything horrid and wrong in a person's life. You shouldn't have been here this long. No one really care. No body really knows. You don't even love yourself. Useless, and nothing ever matters when you are gone from me.
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Re: Everything to do with You.
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 18th October 2002 @ 11:33:04 PM AEST
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Awww, don't be so hard on yourself...
This is a good write but I can see you are in alot of pain... keep writing, it really helps.
Welcome to YPDC!!
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Re: Everything to do with You.
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by Sandra on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 02:58:01 AM AEST
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| This poem has great voice! And I know and understand where you are coming from. I hope to see more poetry from you in the future. |
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Re: Everything to do with You.
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by NotBagheadX on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 01:03:18 PM AEST
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| you know, you are really starting to sound like me. please try and save your self, its already too late for me I now only live to make other people happy because it's all i know. please try to live for your self. |
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Re: Everything to do with You.
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by Fwog on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 10:35:13 AM AEST
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Through the pain a glimmer of light,
your pain is so deep, and yet I sense such a strength welling deep within your soul.
No cliches from me but please dance on.. |
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Re: Everything to do with You.
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by viola on
Sunday, 17th November 2002 @ 03:07:04 PM AEST
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| I love the bit about happiness not being your friend, it was delusion. Pure brilliance. |
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