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Scared People
Contributed by
PunkRocker494
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Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 05:16:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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People are afraid of the unkown
The unshown
The things to come
Like
Where do you go when youre done?
The uncurable, unstopable
Force of the unkown
When will your fear be shown?
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Re: Scared People
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by betty on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 05:21:46 PM AEST
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Great poem, My only suggestion is to break up "where do you go when youre done" into 2 lines. Otherwise, I thought it was perfection.
Please feel free to critisize mine. |
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Re: Scared People
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 06:23:17 PM AEST
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I really liked this and enjoyed it please keep it up and keep it coming
much love,
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Re: Scared People
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by bernard on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:18:31 AM AEST
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There are alas many fears in this old world of ours most people are afraid of something or another good write.
bernard. |
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Re: Scared People
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by The_Unknown on
Friday, 26th November 2010 @ 04:33:56 PM AEST
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| I like thiiiis. :) |
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