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Dardor!
Contributed by
DerPinguin44
on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 05:14:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Deep in the forest,
lies an deep buried treasure.
Will it be opened,
to bring all it's pleasures?
So here comes our hero,
Very dorky, in clad armor.
Came from his hometown,
left through the town harbor.
Found here this small island,
along with a forest.
Came here with his buddy,
Known as big fat... Boris.
Dardor's his name,
Looking for fun,
Stumbled upon this forest,
Never more look like a bum.
He's now found the treasure,
his wife on his mind.
Yet there's something missing,
something left behind.
BORIS! Boris is gone!
Where did he go?
Dardor never found out,
And now nobody knows.
Dardors now back home,
At home with his wife.
When all of a sudden,
Boris comes back in his life!
"You left me for dead,
Left me all for my own!
You stole all the treasure,
Boy I shoud've known!"
"No, no, Boris!
You've got it all wrong!
You disappeared,
Time ago so long.
Now that you're back,
I'll give you some cash!
Just don't be so mad,
You're life will be a bash!"
Now he's forgiven,
His life is on track.
His wife by his side,
Boris and Dardor, friends, Back-To-Back.
Copyright ©
DerPinguin44
... [
2004-06-19 17:14:12]
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Re: Dardor!
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by Archie on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 06:48:38 PM AEST
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| It seems like children's poetry, it's funny and witty but simplistic. I hope that is the way you intended it |
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Re: Dardor!
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by buchi on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:51:43 AM AEST
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| Your purpose highlights, meanings, moods, objects, subjects & whatever 'effects' ... A must read for my class...lit class. Just done rifgt.......carefully thought out ...and.. this poem has its ability to allow everyone else to reach that realization ,,,, |
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Re: Dardor!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 06:58:49 PM AEST
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| Really cute and funny. |
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