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LoVe WaS NeVeR WHaT THeY DReaMeD
Contributed by
xslashxprettyxskinx
on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 03:38:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She knew-
When she looked,
And she saw-
What she'd seen,
That he wasn't ever as honest-
Never as truthful, as he seemed.
She knew-
When he saw,
And he looked-
What he'd seen,
Thinking her eyes werent ever-
Never as beautiful, as they seemed.
They knew-
When they caught,
As their eyes met-
What they thought,
Thought they knew-
Knew Love was never, like their dreams.
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xslashxprettyxskinx
... [
2004-06-19 15:38:08]
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Re: LoVe WaS NeVeR WHaT THeY DReaMeD
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 05:47:46 PM AEST
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Love can be a fickle friend when not entered into fully aware of what is possible. Too many rush in looking for paradise. You only find it if you both create it.
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Re: LoVe WaS NeVeR WHaT THeY DReaMeD
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by Broken_Skin on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 05:54:50 PM AEST
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| wow, that hit me. Thats was unusual. nice one x |
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Re: LoVe WaS NeVeR WHaT THeY DReaMeD
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 01:25:43 AM AEST
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kind of odd but good nonetheless. i liked the odd kinda structure and flow.
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Re: LoVe WaS NeVeR WHaT THeY DReaMeD
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 07:47:42 PM AEST
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brilliant and sooo true:) hugs n' love nessa
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