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Transfusion
Contributed by
Ina
on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 03:12:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I break his ugly
with my
pony-tailed heart
it sounds like
a little girls
face
in the morning
sweet velvet
and satin eyes
I forget to look
at his eyelashes
colorful
like a peacocks
tail
instead
I look into
his awakening
spiral
sun
like a Mime God
I smirk
into his
fetus heart
ripping apart
two more
bitter kisses
I hope
he is satisfied
when my
blood
rains
on his
sickly
dried-out
parade
Copyright ©
Ina
... [
2004-06-19 15:12:06]
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Re: Transfusion
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 03:13:32 PM AEST
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beautifully done I liked the wording and it was an amazing write keep it up...
much love,
Dani |
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Re: Transfusion
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:52:48 PM AEST
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| outstanding as always. well done you***** |
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Re: Transfusion
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by buchi on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 09:10:57 AM AEST
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| Why dont I get it!!......... |
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Re: Transfusion
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 10:22:24 PM AEST
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| well written write. =] |
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