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Oblivion
Contributed by
parkman
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Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:54:01 PM in AEST
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Bitter and twisted, is that what I am
A simple lowlife, poor excuse for a man
Looking at the world, through eyes of scum
Lying in the gutter, where I come from
Snarling and sneering, is that what I do
When coming towards me, I look at you
Spitting and cursing, like a demon
As you step on me, it’s so demeaning
Punching and kicking, at thin air
You smirk at me, blankly I stare
My head exploding, pain so sheer
I slip into oblivion and have no fear
In my world, I am everything
On my throne, I am the king
Peace throughout, in my domain
Total silence, in oblivion, I remain
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2004-06-19 14:54:01]
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Re: Oblivion
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 03:08:01 PM AEST
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beautifully written lots of emotion and feeling flowing through gets the reader wante to read some more...keep it up...
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Re: Oblivion
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by pixie on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 08:37:19 AM AEST
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greatly written, brill poem
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Re: Oblivion
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by buchi on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 05:22:37 AM AEST
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| The use of a rhyme to express an opinion may seem quaint & ridiculous but it's never inadmissible or wrong. I love this... |
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