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Drive
Contributed by
parkman
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Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:49:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Your sleek body
Your slender behind
A model like you
Is hard to find
Those sexual curves
You purr like a cat
Just to be near you
Is a pleasure attack
Your rythmic movement
The grip you have got
Gives me great pleasure
That you're the car that I bought
Copyright ©
parkman
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2004-06-19 14:49:54]
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Re: Drive
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:53:25 PM AEST
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this one is funny!
i thought you were talking about a new girl friend right up until the last line.
was that your intension?
you've done a good job on this! |
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Re: Drive
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 03:10:20 PM AEST
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very amusing yes I thought the same about it being about your girlfriend I enjoyed this great job keep it up...
much love,
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Re: Drive
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 03:40:26 PM AEST
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Well, you got me!! LOLOLOL. I thought you were talking about your girlfriend too. You should write more comedy.
Rita |
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