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Wish of a Broken Man
Contributed by
Bones
on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:35:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Distance is such a cruel thing
It's worse than learning street slang
I'm still here, and missing you
Though I know we'll be together soon
I hate it that your not here
Now, when I need you the most
You are my only support
Bleeding sweat, and covered in dust
It's like seeing you is my lust
Because I see you in visions of the mind
Seeing these make me fill blind
I hate being away from you
I wish there was something I could do
To see you
Copyright ©
Bones
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2004-06-19 14:35:24]
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Re: Wish of a Broken Man
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:45:28 PM AEST
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beautifully written I liked the beauiful words and how you used them keep it up...
read and comment my stuff if you want Id love to hear what you think...
much love,
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Re: Wish of a Broken Man
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:45:54 PM AEST
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nice poem, its tough being apart from those you love. A+++
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Re: Wish of a Broken Man
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by patp on
Tuesday, 10th July 2007 @ 12:47:41 PM AEST
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| very easily read , i can tell that you miss this someone very much. |
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