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A Sorry Excuse Of A Lover
Contributed by
01_zanzebar
on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:19:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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I can't beleive it
just not again
its always the same
its always my fault
Iam a victim of myself
and those around me
conciencious objector
wasting away
ironically destroyed
by what i said was true
it was all my stupid perception
of me loving you
torn to peices
as i always am
no-where to run
I have no-where to hide
its all my fault
theres no-one else to blame
i wish for something that doesnt exist
and base my morals around lies and decete
im just so damn foolish
iam never satisfied
i through away the ones that love me
so i can be fickle, and love another
its my bloody fault
it is never anybody else's
i get myself in this mess
and never think to bring a shovel, to aid in my secape
Iam trapped within my own pathetic mind
walls carved from bigitory and stupidity
why should i even bother
it will just hurt someone else
in the end i said what i bacame
and vowed never to become
but for once Iam right
to fool and be fooled
by everything under the sun
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01_zanzebar
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2004-06-19 12:19:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: A Sorry Excuse Of A Lover
(User Rating: 1 ) by pyrofairyburning on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 01:19:25 PM AEST (User
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Well, There a few spelling mistakes, but I can't spell for crap either. I also think it was a bit drawn out. An okay read for me 6 outa 10.
P.S. Not trying to be mean, just constructive.
Blessed Be,
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