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A Sorry Excuse Of A Lover

Contributed by 01_zanzebar on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:19:10 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief




I can't beleive it
just not again
its always the same
its always my fault

Iam a victim of myself
and those around me
conciencious objector
wasting away

ironically destroyed
by what i said was true
it was all my stupid perception
of me loving you

torn to peices
as i always am
no-where to run
I have no-where to hide

its all my fault
theres no-one else to blame
i wish for something that doesnt exist
and base my morals around lies and decete

im just so damn foolish
iam never satisfied
i through away the ones that love me
so i can be fickle, and love another

its my bloody fault
it is never anybody else's
i get myself in this mess
and never think to bring a shovel, to aid in my secape

Iam trapped within my own pathetic mind
walls carved from bigitory and stupidity
why should i even bother
it will just hurt someone else

in the end i said what i bacame
and vowed never to become
but for once Iam right
to fool and be fooled

by everything under the sun




Copyright © 01_zanzebar ... [ 2004-06-19 12:19:10]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: A Sorry Excuse Of A Lover (User Rating: 1 )
by pyrofairyburning on Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 01:19:25 PM AEST
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Well, There a few spelling mistakes, but I can't spell for crap either. I also think it was a bit drawn out. An okay read for me 6 outa 10.


P.S. Not trying to be mean, just constructive.

Blessed Be,
Tink




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