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Bring Me Back To Sanity
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:14:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Oh sanity!!!
Accept me for who I am.
My beautiful existence is growing stale.
I long to bleed out impurity.
To reseal the wounds self-inflicted.
Take me out of this black depth.
Rejoin my dissentegrating insides.
Open my eyes; reveal the white.
Remove my molded soul.
Touch my lungs to breathe.
Let me return to my imaginary.
OH SANITY!!!
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Sirena_Degana
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2004-06-19 12:14:29]
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Re: Bring Me Back To Sanity
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by Archie on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:16:46 PM AEST
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| This is a great poem you words are very compelling. |
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Re: Bring Me Back To Sanity
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by pyrofairyburning on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:13:26 PM AEST
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It sounds like a plea from a rape victim I know quite well. Um, the only constructive thing I can give is put a comma after wounds, to show a short lapse and to make seem more like an explanation. 9 outa 10.
Blessed Be,
Tink |
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Re: Bring Me Back To Sanity
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:17:23 PM AEST
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I loved this!!!!! keep it up please.....keep it coming
much love,
Dani |
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