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The Letter
Contributed by
pixie
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Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:51:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I thought I’d write you a letter,
To tell you I’ve left & found somebody better,
They give me so much more than you,
I need passion that feels brand new.
The years we shared were great,
But to last forever wasn’t our fate,
I never meant to hurt you my love,
But I didn’t want you when push came to shove.
By the time you read this I will be far away,
I want you to be happy, for that I pray,
Everything we had I will cherish,
It is a shame our love had to perish.
I remember the day when we first met,
Of all the happy times I will never forget,
But the past few months have been so tough,
I’m sorry my darling but you don’t give me enough.
I need to be loved and understood,
You didn’t show me & that was no good.
I thought I’d write you a letter,
To tell you I’ve left & found somebody better.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-19 11:51:11]
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Re: The Letter
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by DragonLuvSong on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:53:48 AM AEST
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| i think this is really good, i like it... |
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Re: The Letter
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by Rhei76 on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:09:21 PM AEST
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| Quite sweet with thoughts of old in a life of new. Nice write. |
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Re: The Letter
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:15:28 PM AEST
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at least you gave them a letter and goodbye.... more than I got.
another great poem , this really hit me hards.
I envy them.... A++++ |
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Re: The Letter
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by carmen_queasy on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:04:49 PM AEST
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| ouch :s it was good though. |
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Re: The Letter
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by emystar on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 05:52:17 AM AEST
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Good work.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Letter
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by 01_zanzebar on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 09:43:18 AM AEST
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great poem, i loved it, but you dont always find someone better
4/5, weldone ol' dear
Rowan |
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Re: The Letter
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by Broken_Skin on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 10:23:58 AM AEST
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This poem i could send to my ex,
hehe.
0nice one
BS x |
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Re: The Letter
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:52:32 AM AEST
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oooooo....... glad its not true, well written too, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:-
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Re: The Letter
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by lexxie on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 03:44:24 PM AEST
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well writen beautiful once agian
l3xxi3 |
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Re: The Letter
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 03:26:29 PM AEST
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| Sweet Heart Aces And To The Point |
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Re: The Letter
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by SnowB on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:11:29 AM AEST
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A very emotional LETTER...sometimes we have to do what is best for ourselves even though it is very hard to do...I love that you penned this from an idea and not personal experience...very creative...
Lena |
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