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TODAY
Contributed by
desire
on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:15:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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today was quiet
while you were gone
it seemed my
day was way to
long
today
was ok in away
but no you is
just not ok
today
was lonesome
cos you were gone
the silence
playing over and over
like a song
today
was filled with
thoughts of you
me wondering
what your up to
but knowing that
your not coming
through
today
was moving to me
it let my heart feel
all the love in me
for you that is real
love that i could
never conceal
today
was slow
becos i missed you so
but anticipating
tomorrow though
so i will wait
till you come to me
i will wait
for you
patiently
today
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desire
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2004-06-19 10:15:57]
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Re: TODAY
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:23:46 AM AEST
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i know how you feel when you were talking about the time going slower.
this is a good piece!
enjoyable to read. |
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Re: TODAY
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by PunkRocker494 on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:31:21 AM AEST
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| I really liked it and I can understand what you're going talkin about. I've been there myself. Keep up the good work. I hope to read more of your work. |
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Re: TODAY
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by pixie on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:10:53 PM AEST
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i know this feeling, great poem
pixie xx |
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