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Twilight Dreams
Contributed by
jan
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Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 06:33:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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Twilight gently bows her head and heaven wakes, sublime.
Ecstatic souls are dancing in beauty’s truth, divine.
Dreamers trip upon the path, of angels high and low.
Flying so fast and smooth, it almost seems too slow.
The moment that I see it, I know the secret's true.
There is no space or time, between heaven, me, and you.
Feel it deep in your soul, the pull of immortal life.
Grasp the thought within your mind, and hold with all your might.
Celestials bask in heaven’s radiant glory.
All you need to know is - there is no end of story.
Copyright ©
jan
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2004-06-19 06:33:54]
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Re: Twilight Dreams
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by Archie on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 06:44:04 AM AEST
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This is an awesome poem, I am espeacially fond of the last two lines
"Celestrials bask in heaven's radient glory
All you need to know is - there is no end of story. |
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Re: Twilight Dreams
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by venkat on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 06:46:58 AM AEST
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This captivates me..perhaps that is the treasure I had...very delightful poem.
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Re: Twilight Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 07:27:44 AM AEST
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I have to agree with Archie. The last two lines were my very favorite and to my way of thinking absolutely true. Life does go on even after death.
Smiles,
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Re: Twilight Dreams
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by pixie on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:51:45 AM AEST
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this is amazing, loved it from start to finish
pixie xx |
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Re: Twilight Dreams
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by lexxie on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:17:52 AM AEST
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this is an awsome poem keep 'em coming
lexxie |
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Re: Twilight Dreams
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 02:50:56 AM AEST
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| A beautifully written poem - every line drew me in ... Jan |
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