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This I promise you
Contributed by
carmen_queasy
on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 06:21:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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This I promise you, that I'll be here, always
Loving everything about you
Except I lied
I promised you I'd be good,
That I'd never decieve you, ever
But I'm just like you
I lied
So there's a little girl,
Hiding away from you
Because if you hold her tonight
You'll be lying the whole night through
I promised you I'd never cry
Yet here flows a fountain, because of you
I'm everything I hate
I lied
I promised you I'd make you proud
And everyday I fall and fail
I lied, I lied, I ***** lied
So there's a little girl,
Hiding from everything you said
You shake her to reality
To everything she dreads
So here I lay, the little girl
You don't love me the way I love you
Wishing you wouldn't go
Because when you love me, I love me too
This I promise you, that I'll be here, always
Except I don't know how long always is
I lied
I'm just like you
Only I'm still here and loving you
And here I am, your little girl
Your little shame, living your lie
I promise to break my every promise
Until the day I die
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2004-06-19 06:21:31]
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Re: This I promise you
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by deathdrop on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 07:42:35 AM AEST
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sad stuff that you're stained to be like the person you wrote about in this...
it was a good poem though. |
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Re: This I promise you
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by luckycharm on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:01:30 AM AEST
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| Your poem was very deep and filled with emotion.-luckycharm. |
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Re: This I promise you
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by pixie on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:53:22 AM AEST
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deep stuff here, you have talent ....very sad..
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: This I promise you
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by lexxie on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 11:16:00 AM AEST
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sad...but very good
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