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Sadist Kiss
Contributed by
Vermillion
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Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 01:55:11 AM in AEST
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Sadist Kiss
i remember when we first met
romeo and juliet when the stage was set
in thought of memories of your sadist kiss
tongue lashings on your child baring hips
you mocked the way i laughed
sitting behind you in class
your cute li'l dimples and red smile
leaving me home alone while at parties you run wild
and the way you looked when you said "i do"
and the way i felt when i replied "i do too"
remember when we gutted open our kids that one day?
and sold their organs for drug money on ebay?
remember when you choked your mother with piano wire
all because she called you "a drunken liar"
in thought of memories of your sadist kiss
the day i found you after you slit your wrists
now here i am sitting at your wake
as people spit on your corpse and curse your fate
inside your cheaply made coffin you lay inside
damnit you slut im so glad you freaking died
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Vermillion
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Re: Sadist Kiss
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:13:19 AM AEST
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ohhhh my dont know what to say this was deeply powerful dark intense dang dont know what else to say
michelle |
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Re: Sadist Kiss
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by carmen_queasy on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 06:24:13 AM AEST
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| ouch, that was... angry. good job |
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Re: Sadist Kiss
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by movax on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 10:57:36 AM AEST
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| Wow, this is good stuff. Freakingly dark. Well done |
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Re: Sadist Kiss
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by pixie on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:16:29 PM AEST
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great dark poem, really loved it :)
pixie xx |
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Re: Sadist Kiss
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by shorty_52 on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 08:32:36 PM AEST
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that was so good. my boyfriend thinks so to. kinda grose in sum ways but it was still hella good. messenge me i'll always answer.
~allyson~ |
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Re: Sadist Kiss
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by temper on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 07:25:49 PM AEST
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| i like dis poem good job can't wait 2 c wut u come up wit next |
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Re: Sadist Kiss
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by assassinatorgirl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 07:55:40 PM AEST
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| wooah heh, nice, how romantic. =P |
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