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The Road Of The Forsaken
Contributed by
xXxFaygoFetishxXx
on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 01:23:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Walking along the road of the forsaken
The path not often taken
Looking up through the dark sky
I see those not willing to die
Walking along a brighter road
Mine leading to the unknown
Walking along the road of the forsaken
The path not often taken
The path taken by those who want to die
Those who want to cry
Those who want to bleed
These are the depressed wishes
Of those whoe take the path not often taken
Weeping as I walk along
I , a single wandering soul
Consumed by the darkness of the unknown
Walking along the road of the forsaken
The path not often taken
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xXxFaygoFetishxXx
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2004-06-19 01:23:31]
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Re: The Road Of The Forsaken
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by Vermillion on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 01:39:42 AM AEST
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for a first poem it is really great a true sign of a excellent writer.
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Re: The Road Of The Forsaken
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:11:05 AM AEST
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well done it draws me deep into it
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Re: The Road Of The Forsaken
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by emystar on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 02:20:41 AM AEST
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I agree, very good for a first write.
Good job.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Road Of The Forsaken
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by deadbloodyrose on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:54:23 PM AEST
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you would never be able to tell this is a first write elizabeth.. its a great poem.. ive read it many times at school and i love it everytime its really good.. i wish i had your talent.. take care... love ya.. AMI JO
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