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I Wonder
Contributed by
Dusty
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Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:14:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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I wonder what you'd say,
If I came to your house,
If I crept in softly,
Quiet as a mouse,
I wonder how you'd feel,
To wake and find me there,
Lying there beside you,
My fingers in your hair,
I wonder what you'd do,
If I moved to kiss your lips,
If I took you in my arms,
And held you in my grip,
I wonder how you'd take it,
To know I feel this way,
I wonder all about you,
Maybe I'll find out someday.
Copyright ©
Dusty
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2004-06-19 00:14:39]
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Re: I Wonder
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:20:15 AM AEST
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| very sweet. good poem lots of feeling. A+++ |
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Re: I Wonder
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:25:47 AM AEST
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Wouldn't it be wonderful to find out. I hope you get your chance. Very interesting piece of work.
Rita |
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Re: I Wonder
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by emystar on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 12:26:54 AM AEST
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Ya never know till u try.
good writing.
luv, hugs,
eemy |
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Re: I Wonder
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by pixie on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:31:44 AM AEST
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wonderful write Dusty... keep em coming
pixie xx |
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