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Simple Sensuality
Contributed by
TheReturnOfx7
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Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 11:23:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Floating down a river of perfumed lips
Distressed at the fire still burning within
Searching for the strength to smother it still
Looking for the answer within hollow muscle impluses
Just can't resist the tenderness of her touch
Yet sparks seem to leap to my chest from her fingertips
The excitement builds, yet begs to be chased away
In search of that one moment to grant me piece of mind
Soon passion gives way to new levels of pleasure
Heat that melts even the most active of fault lines
The aftershocks still found within trembling fingers
Drawing simple lines in dropletts of sweat.
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Re: Simple Sensuality
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by pixie on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:28:58 AM AEST
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great write,
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Re: Simple Sensuality
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by Broken_Skin on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:51:01 PM AEST
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A lot of emotion provoking imagery here,
I dont understand why you havent many
comments on this one,
uncultered swines! lol
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Re: Simple Sensuality
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 06:46:56 AM AEST
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vivid imagery, jason, very sensual poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Simple Sensuality
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by thumper on
Tuesday, 29th June 2004 @ 09:18:11 PM AEST
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Wow! Did it get hot in here all of a sudden?? lol Very sensual. I read your post in the forum about comments and I thought I'd check out some of your writes. Don't know how I missed them,but then again, I'm not here 24/7. Nice work.
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